What do they need or want?
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What do they gain or learn?
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What conflict or dilemma do they face?
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How does it move their story forward?
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Gavin
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He wants to prove himself a good captain
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He steps into his role as captain of a ship
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Living up to the example his family set
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He begins his leadership as a captain
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Aghri
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He wants to defend and protect worlds from invasion
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He becomes first officer under the son of his hero
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He is suffering from homesickness and depression
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He starts to acknowledge his loneliness
|
Digus
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He wants to escape from his dismal reality
|
He gains an offer to get off the planet by sinking his city
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He struggles with the morality of his actions
|
He takes a step toward becoming a villain
|
Nikola
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She wants to prove herself a great pilot
|
She starts her first position aboard an actual ship
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Making a good first impression on her superior officers
|
She starts her journey with the Star Keepers.
|
Long Tail
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He wants to serve and escape from his nightmares
|
He becomes a communications officer aboard the Arrowhead
|
The same old nightmares and panic attacks
|
He is introduced as Gavin’s best friend
|
Garrison
|
He wants to do his duty as a Star Keeper officer
|
He starts getting used to working under his younger cousin
|
He struggles with working under his cousin
|
He starts to work out his issues with Gavin
|
Qarian
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She wants to fight and defend the people of the United Worlds
|
She is given the chance to work with a young newcomer
|
She is wary of the new captain’s ability
|
She adjusts to working with a new captain.
|
Bardlun
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He wants a nice quiet final run of service.
|
He starts his final run of service under a new captain
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He is feeling the effects of his old age.
|
He starts his final run of service.
|
What do they need or want?
|
What do they gain or learn?
|
What conflict or dilemma do they face?
|
How does it move their story forward?
|
|
Gavin
|
He
wants to pull off his first big mission
|
He
learns of Digus’s actions on Hedes
|
Figuring
out who’s behind the terrorist actions and stopping it
|
It
gives him a focus for the remainder of the story
|
Aghri
|
He wants to
help the people of Hedes from the terrorist
|
He learns of
Digus’s actions on Hedes
|
Figuring out
how to help the people of Hedes
|
He is given
a people to focus on and protect
|
Digus
|
He
wants to sink the city and avoid capture
|
He
gains a potential adversary in the Star Keepers
|
He
attracts the attention of the Star Keepers
|
He
is given greater obstacles to overcome
|
Nikola
|
She wants to
help out with this situation
|
She starts
her first real adventure on the ship
|
Facing up to
the challenge
|
She is given
an adventure to embark on
|
Long Tail
|
He
wants to check out this cool-sounding planet
|
He
gets a chance to brush up on Hedian languages
|
Some
slight panic attacks, but nothing big
|
He
starts this ship’s first mission
|
Garrison
|
He wants to
do his duty as a Star Keeper officer
|
He is
assigned an important mission
|
He still struggles
a bit with working under his cousin
|
He gets an assignment
to focus on
|
Qarian
|
She
needs to defend the people of Hedes from this enemy
|
She
is given an essential assignment
|
She
understands the serious nature of this situation
|
She
gets the chance to see the captain in action
|
Bardlun
|
He wants to
do what he can to help
|
He gets a
situation where he can be of good use
|
He is a bit
afraid this run won’t be peaceful after all
|
He starts
studying up on Hedian culture
|
Traveling to Hedes
|
What do they need or want?
|
What do they gain or learn?
|
What conflict or dilemma do
they face?
|
How does it move their story
forward?
|
Gavin
|
He wants to make sure that this
mission is successful
|
He gains the friendship of Aghri
|
Coming to terms with his own
responsibility
|
He gains a strong ally in Aghri
|
Aghri
|
He wants to help Gavin step into his own as a captain
|
He gains a friend in Gavin
|
Figuring out the situation on Hedes
|
He and Gavin start to work together as a team
|
Digus
|
He wants to do as much damage as
possible before the ship
|
He gains access to the control tower
|
A time crunch before his
opportunities run out
|
He moves his plan forward
|
Nikola
|
She wants to learn about these Hedians
|
She starts to study the race of Hedians
|
The long history of the Hedian race
|
She and Bardlun are shown to care for one another
|
Long Tail
|
He wants to pick up the language of
Hyukteri before arrival
|
He learns a great deal of Hyukteri
language
|
A very short span to learn their
specific language
|
It shows him hard at work
|
Garrison
|
He wants to make sure the ship is ready for the
planet
|
He analyzes the hull’s ability to withstand the moon
field
|
The planet’s moons will mess with the ship’s systems
|
He is shown hard at work
|
Qarian
|
She analyzes the situation on the
planet
|
She gains insight into the villain’s
abilities
|
Figuring out just what kind of enemy
they are dealing with
|
She is shown to be good at what she
does
|
Bardlun
|
He needs to research the data on the Hedian people
|
He learns about and studies the Hedians
|
Due to them being cut off, there isn’t much
information
|
We see him doing what he does
|
What do they need or want?
|
What do they gain or learn?
|
What conflict or dilemma do they face?
|
How does it move their story forward?
|
|
Gavin
|
He
wants to get onto the planet safely
|
He
experiences going through the planet’s moons
|
The
impenetrable dust cloud around Hedes
|
He
gets to Hedes
|
Aghri
|
He wants to
get through to help the people
|
He
experiences going through the planet’s moons
|
The dust
cloud around Hedes
|
He gets a
glimpse of the Hedians’ situation
|
Digus
|
He
wants to prevent the ship from getting there
|
He
learns to track them through the tower
|
Figuring
out a way to stop them arriving
|
He
begins looking beyond his city
|
Nikola
|
She has to
fly through the cloud
|
She gains
the experience of flying through
|
The enormous
dust cloud
|
She pulls
off her first major test as a pilot on the ship
|
Long Tail
|
He
wants to get to the planet safely
|
He
learns that a lot of moons is very bad
|
Holding
on as they pass through the moon field
|
He
arrives on Hedes
|
Garrison
|
He wants to
get the ship through safely
|
He learns to
navigate and work with his new pilot
|
Plotting a safe
course through the moon field
|
He has to be
very careful getting them through
|
Qarian
|
She
has to help her crew get through the moon field
|
She
gains a sense of just how isolated the planet is
|
Watching
as the crew gets them through the moons
|
She
has to sit on the sidelines
|
Bardlun
|
He needs to
help his team understand this world
|
He studies
the effects such a field would have on the planet
|
Understanding
those living in such a situation
|
He starts to
understand the people living there.
|
What do they need or want?
|
What do they gain or learn?
|
What conflict or dilemma do they face?
|
How does it move their story forward?
|
|
Gavin
|
He
needs to lead his crew to stop Digus
|
He
learns much about his crew and his job
|
Bringing
in Digus and leading his crew
|
He
learns and grows as a captain as he chases Digus
|
Aghri
|
He wants to
help the people and understand them
|
He learns
about how the Hedians survive in their environment
|
Being in
such an artificial environment
|
He experiences
a world opposite to his own
|
Digus
|
He
wants to sink the city despite the Star Keeper involvement
|
He
scopes out the Star Keepers and works around them
|
The
Star Keepers investigation
|
He
starts to develop a rivalry with the captain
|
Nikola
|
She wants to
help with the investigation
|
She learns
about the people of Hedes
|
Not being
particularly needed in the investigation
|
She tries to
find ways to be helpful in the situation
|
Long Tail
|
He
wants to help but stay out of trouble
|
He
learns about the world and people of Hedes
|
He
is concerned about the situation raising nightmares
|
He
helps out with the situation
|
Garrison
|
He wants to
figure out the situation and beat Digus
|
He puts
together lots of clues about Digus
|
Figuring out
how to beat a genius working under Gavin
|
He puts his
brain to good use working around Digus
|
Qarian
|
She
has to deal with an escalating situation
|
She
starts to understand who they’re dealing with
|
Digus
and all of his tricks
|
She
and Garrison work together to stop Digus
|
Bardlun
|
He needs to
work with the city government to stop Digus
|
He learns
the inner workings of the city
|
Studying the
people and understanding the criminal
|
He puts his
skills to good use to defeat Digus
|
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