Monday, November 27, 2017

Star Keepers: Character Arc Development

 So, to develop my story, I've been working to develop my characters and the arcs they go through throughout the book, hopefully to help me figure out what needs to happen in each chapter. I've broken the story down into about ten section, and analyzed where the characters would roughly be at the time. It's a good practice for just about any writer, so I thought I'd share a few on here.

What do they need or want?
What do they gain or learn?
What conflict or dilemma do they face?
How does it move their story forward?
Gavin
He wants to prove himself a good captain
He steps into his role as captain of a ship
Living up to the example his family set
He begins his leadership as a captain
Aghri
He wants to defend and protect worlds from invasion
He becomes first officer under the son of his hero
He is suffering from homesickness and depression
He starts to acknowledge his loneliness
Digus
He wants to escape from his dismal reality
He gains an offer to get off the planet by sinking his city
He struggles with the morality of his actions
He takes a step toward becoming a villain
Nikola
She wants to prove herself a great pilot
She starts her first position aboard an actual ship
Making a good first impression on her superior officers
She starts her journey with the Star Keepers.
Long Tail
He wants to serve and escape from his nightmares
He becomes a communications officer aboard the Arrowhead
The same old nightmares and panic attacks
He is introduced as Gavin’s best friend
Garrison
He wants to do his duty as a Star Keeper officer
He starts getting used to working under his younger cousin
He struggles with working under his cousin
He starts to work out his issues with Gavin
Qarian
She wants to fight and defend the people of the United Worlds
She is given the chance to work with a young newcomer
She is wary of the new captain’s ability
She adjusts to working with a new captain.
Bardlun
He wants a nice quiet final run of service.
He starts his final run of service under a new captain
He is feeling the effects of his old age.
He starts his final run of service.

What do they need or want?
What do they gain or learn?
What conflict or dilemma do they face?
How does it move their story forward?
Gavin
He wants to pull off his first big mission
He learns of Digus’s actions on Hedes
Figuring out who’s behind the terrorist actions and stopping it
It gives him a focus for the remainder of the story
Aghri
He wants to help the people of Hedes from the terrorist
He learns of Digus’s actions on Hedes
Figuring out how to help the people of Hedes
He is given a people to focus on and protect
Digus
He wants to sink the city and avoid capture
He gains a potential adversary in the Star Keepers
He attracts the attention of the Star Keepers
He is given greater obstacles to overcome
Nikola
She wants to help out with this situation
She starts her first real adventure on the ship
Facing up to the challenge
She is given an adventure to embark on
Long Tail
He wants to check out this cool-sounding planet
He gets a chance to brush up on Hedian languages
Some slight panic attacks, but nothing big
He starts this ship’s first mission
Garrison
He wants to do his duty as a Star Keeper officer
He is assigned an important mission
He still struggles a bit with working under his cousin
He gets an assignment to focus on
Qarian
She needs to defend the people of Hedes from this enemy
She is given an essential assignment
She understands the serious nature of this situation
She gets the chance to see the captain in action
Bardlun
He wants to do what he can to help
He gets a situation where he can be of good use
He is a bit afraid this run won’t be peaceful after all
He starts studying up on Hedian culture

Traveling to Hedes
What do they need or want?
What do they gain or learn?
What conflict or dilemma do they face?
How does it move their story forward?
Gavin
He wants to make sure that this mission is successful
He gains the friendship of Aghri
Coming to terms with his own responsibility
He gains a strong ally in Aghri
Aghri
He wants to help Gavin step into his own as a captain
He gains a friend in Gavin
Figuring out the situation on Hedes
He and Gavin start to work together as a team
Digus
He wants to do as much damage as possible before the ship
He gains access to the control tower
A time crunch before his opportunities run out
He moves his plan forward
Nikola
She wants to learn about these Hedians
She starts to study the race of Hedians
The long history of the Hedian race
She and Bardlun are shown to care for one another
Long Tail
He wants to pick up the language of Hyukteri before arrival
He learns a great deal of Hyukteri language
A very short span to learn their specific language
It shows him hard at work
Garrison
He wants to make sure the ship is ready for the planet
He analyzes the hull’s ability to withstand the moon field
The planet’s moons will mess with the ship’s systems
He is shown hard at work
Qarian
She analyzes the situation on the planet
She gains insight into the villain’s abilities
Figuring out just what kind of enemy they are dealing with
She is shown to be good at what she does
Bardlun
He needs to research the data on the Hedian people
He learns about and studies the Hedians
Due to them being cut off, there isn’t much information
We see him doing what he does

What do they need or want?
What do they gain or learn?
What conflict or dilemma do they face?
How does it move their story forward?
Gavin
He wants to get onto the planet safely
He experiences going through the planet’s moons
The impenetrable dust cloud around Hedes
He gets to Hedes
Aghri
He wants to get through to help the people
He experiences going through the planet’s moons
The dust cloud around Hedes
He gets a glimpse of the Hedians’ situation
Digus
He wants to prevent the ship from getting there
He learns to track them through the tower
Figuring out a way to stop them arriving
He begins looking beyond his city
Nikola
She has to fly through the cloud
She gains the experience of flying through
The enormous dust cloud
She pulls off her first major test as a pilot on the ship
Long Tail
He wants to get to the planet safely
He learns that a lot of moons is very bad
Holding on as they pass through the moon field
He arrives on Hedes
Garrison
He wants to get the ship through safely
He learns to navigate and work with his new pilot
Plotting a safe course through the moon field
He has to be very careful getting them through
Qarian
She has to help her crew get through the moon field
She gains a sense of just how isolated the planet is
Watching as the crew gets them through the moons
She has to sit on the sidelines
Bardlun
He needs to help his team understand this world
He studies the effects such a field would have on the planet
Understanding those living in such a situation
He starts to understand the people living there.

What do they need or want?
What do they gain or learn?
What conflict or dilemma do they face?
How does it move their story forward?
Gavin
He needs to lead his crew to stop Digus
He learns much about his crew and his job
Bringing in Digus and leading his crew
He learns and grows as a captain as he chases Digus
Aghri
He wants to help the people and understand them
He learns about how the Hedians survive in their environment
Being in such an artificial environment
He experiences a world opposite to his own
Digus
He wants to sink the city despite the Star Keeper involvement
He scopes out the Star Keepers and works around them
The Star Keepers investigation
He starts to develop a rivalry with the captain
Nikola
She wants to help with the investigation
She learns about the people of Hedes
Not being particularly needed in the investigation
She tries to find ways to be helpful in the situation
Long Tail
He wants to help but stay out of trouble
He learns about the world and people of Hedes
He is concerned about the situation raising nightmares
He helps out with the situation
Garrison
He wants to figure out the situation and beat Digus
He puts together lots of clues about Digus
Figuring out how to beat a genius working under Gavin
He puts his brain to good use working around Digus
Qarian
She has to deal with an escalating situation
She starts to understand who they’re dealing with
Digus and all of his tricks
She and Garrison work together to stop Digus
Bardlun
He needs to work with the city government to stop Digus
He learns the inner workings of the city
Studying the people and understanding the criminal
He puts his skills to good use to defeat Digus


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